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Writing effective credit memos efficiently

Mary Ellen Biery
March 31, 2025
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Best practices for writing a credit memo 

Done right, a credit memo supports sound credit decisions and tells a clear, fact-based story that stands up to scrutiny months or years later. Learn what traits are common among effective credit memos.

The importance of well-crafted credit memos

Why is writing effective credit memos so vexing? Given that a credit memorandum is one of the most critical documents in the life of the loan, it would seem like a straightforward process.

However, lenders, credit analysts, and other banking staff frequently seek tips for writing better credit memos.

One reason they do is that writing an effective credit memo is important. The loan committee uses the credit memo in deciding whether to approve the loan. A credit memo may also be used for modifications, renewals, or annual loan reviews later on. The lender needs to put forth an accurate and complete picture of the borrower—not only for the borrower’s sake, but also for the financial institution’s risk management.

Done right, a credit memo not only supports sound credit decisions—it also tells a clear, fact-based story that stands up to scrutiny months or years later. Yet many credit analysts and lenders still struggle with what to include, what to cut, and how to structure the memo to be useful to decision-makers.

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The challenge is understandable. With a lot of data from various sources available, a credit memo can take on a life of its own, becoming extremely complex and lengthy.

Lenders and credit analysts must organize into one cohesive credit memo the following: borrower information, financial ratios, any global cash flow analysis, the assigned risk rating, proposed loan pricing, and terms of the proposed loan.

In addition, the loan application and credit analysis data should be combined in such a way that credit reviewers or supervisory agencies can reach the same decision the financial institution did and access the supporting documentation.

Not surprisingly, many bankers find the task to be a difficult one.

Templates and frameworks can help, but as Kent Kirby, a retired Chief Credit Officer and senior advisor at Abrigo, pointed out during a recent webinar, too often memos are either too dense or too sparse. “They suffer from what I call the Goldilocks syndrome,” he said. “They're either too hot—in other words, they're overkill—or they're too cold. They're sort of like this intellectual desert where [the reader is] just kind of parched trying to find more information.”

“It's really hard to find something just right.”

However, credit memos that achieve that “just right” outcome have several key traits in common, according to Kirby:

Effective credit memos are clear

Clearly constructed credit memos avoid vague phrasing and assumptions. That includes eliminating unnecessary adjectives and generic statements.

“Don’t tell me what I know. Tell me what I don’t know,” Kirby emphasized. “I know revenues fell 25%, but why?”

For example, rather than saying, “There was a significant drop in net income,” a clear memo would explain the specific cause and its implications. What changed, and why does it matter?

Clarity also means staying focused on facts. Opinions or speculation—no matter how tempting—can introduce liability and undermine the institution’s objectivity. “Keep your opinion out of it unless it’s based in fact,” Kirby advised. “Any speculation or opinion really probably is nothing more than that. And chances are it could be more damaging to you, especially in a lawsuit.”

Concise credit memos speed decisions

“Keep it pithy,” Kirby told webinar attendees. “Don’t tell me things I don’t need to know or that are not germane to the process.”

A bloated credit memo combined with a multi-tiered approval process creates a slow, frustrating experience for staff and borrowers. Kirby cited FDIC statistics showing nearly three-quarters of community banks require three or more levels of approval, regardless of the loan size. “You don’t need the board to be looking at a half-million dollar deal,” Kirby said.

Concise memos that focus on relevant, decision-making information and respect the reader’s time are one lever for improving loan turnaround time in a system where delays often pile up.

“If you sit there and put a lot of junk in there, they have to sort through it,” he added. The loan committee or whoever approves loans will “do it because they want to make sure that the bank or the institution is not hurt, but [it] just wastes their time.”

Kirby recommended tailoring the length and content of the memo to the complexity and size of the loan. For smaller, straightforward credits, such as an equipment loan, consider using bullet points and streamlining background information. “Don’t write War and Peace ,” he said. “Just bullet points… keep it simple.”

Being concise doesn’t mean skipping context altogether, but it does mean avoiding repetition and fluff. It also means removing ritualistic content—such as unnecessary analysis of debt service coverage for a working capital line—when it doesn’t directly relate to how the loan will be repaid.

Focus on relevant repayment and credit risk information

What’s relevant in a credit memo? Kirby suggested focusing on what truly affects repayment and credit risk. “Give me the reason why the loan was made and how it’s going to get paid back,” he said. “Don’t get into this ritual… tell me the story.”

That includes identifying drivers of performance, such as why sales or margins are changing—not just that they are. And it means pointing out key risks and mitigants in plain language.

To make the memo relevant, Kirby recommended addressing questions like:

  • What can go wrong?
  • What’s the likelihood of that happening?
  • What’s the borrower’s plan B—and what’s yours?

He noted that too many memos focus heavily on collateral, even though “95% of the time, we don’t touch it.” Instead, analysts should treat collateral more like insurance: useful, but not central. “Our whole goal is to get paid back through the normal course of business,” he said.

Relevant memos also consider management’s actual ability to run the business. Avoid using the words “well-regarded in the industry.” Instead, assess whether the team has the experience, controls, and succession plan to sustain the business over time.

Effective credit memos are organized

An organized credit memo helps reviewers and approvers quickly understand the request and make an informed decision. That starts with a clear summary at the top of the memo.

“Most people that read these things are going to make a decision within a few minutes,” Kirby noted. “I want the decision up at the top. What do you want me to do?”

A summary of the background usually follows, and the contents of that section should be fitting to the risk being considered. Kirby also recommended structuring memos around key building blocks, especially for more complex deals. These include:

  • Purpose of the loan and how it will be repaid
  • Risks to repayment and mitigation strategies
  • Borrower’s and bank’s backup plans (plan B)
  • Management capabilities and controls
  • Industry considerations and borrower positioning
  • When relevant, performance projections and covenants. (For example, if the financing transaction will result in a risk rating downgrade of two grades or more, use covenants to show how the company will return to the previous rating.)

Finally, the risk rating and final recommendation are critical components of the credit memo. The rating for a loan should represent the sum of the earlier information and analysis provided. It’s “an objective assessment of what you have said in your credit memo,” Kirby said.

He emphasized that not every memo requires every section to be equally robust. The content should expand or contract based on the deal’s risk and complexity.

How technology helps

Credit memos can easily become complex given the amount of data coming from disparate sources. Manually creating those credit memos by copying and pasting information from previous credit memos can create two types of vulnerabilities for an institution: efficiency and data integrity.

Automating the creation of credit memos eliminates what can be a major bottleneck at the approval stage. Sharing days off the approval process translates into a better experience for customers or members and more time for credit analysts to facilitate additional loans.

In addition, loan origination software that automatically feeds relevant information into the memo avoids errors that can arise from manual data entry. The last thing a bank or credit union wants is to make a decision based on incorrect information.

Getting to “just right”

Credit memos play a critical role in risk management and credit decisioning. But they shouldn’t be an exercise in verbosity or regulatory appeasement.

“This is not a ritual to satisfy the supervisors,” Kirby reminded attendees. “It’s an important, integral part of the banking business.”

By focusing on clarity, conciseness, relevance, and good organization—rather than tradition or boilerplate—credit analysts can develop memos that better support both credit decisions and long-term portfolio performance.

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This version updates a blog originally posted in July 2019. The blog was written with the assistance of ChatGPT, an AI large language model, and was reviewed and revised by Abrigo's subject-matter expert.
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Mary Ellen Biery

Senior Strategist & Content Manager
Mary Ellen Biery is Senior Strategist & Content Manager at Abrigo, where she works with advisors and other experts to develop whitepapers, original research, and other resources that help financial institutions drive growth and manage risk. A former equities reporter for Dow Jones Newswires whose work has been published in

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